Well I liked it. Mind you, it's the first story I've ever read where one of the characters started out as a guy, turned into a woman, then went back to being a guy at the end, so I don't have much of a base for comparison.

*snicker* Yeah that would be a problem... I'm glad you liked it anyway. LOL

You handled the sex very well. I think I've been reading slash too long, though, because all through it I kept thinking "This would be a lot hotter if Fraser were a guy." Apparently, Ray felt the same way*g*

You know what... I feel the same way. L! As I was writing it I was like... "this just isn't right... I miss Frase's good bits!" Heh! So at least you know where Ray's sentiments come from...

Oh and I'm cringing at the very thought of MPREG... *shudder*