Er...

(Shut up. I'm the Admin. Thhhhppt.)

It's late (five in the morning) and it's too big (4,980 words) and I'm disappointed that I only got a chance to write one, sigh. But clearly I don't know what the fuck I'm doing. So.

I give you Number Eight.

[identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com 2003-08-11 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
It may be late, and long, and only one cliche, but my oh my, you really made it worth it. Lovely, lovely image of Ray dancing there (even in polyester). What a great first line. And I love Polite Fraser, so the hot topic at the gay bar. And mmm...yummy, the two of them so hot and sweet together in that room. Nice, nice, nice.