First of all, your subject line made me grin (as any reference to HCL usually does). So, yay.
The story: gorgeously woven. I love the mood, the picture, the feeling you create. I love Fraser's thoughts, so keenly off-set by Ray's words, Ray's gentle worries.
So many wonderful lines, but this one stuck with me:
All his dreams are cloaked in white, soft blue shadows.
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Date: 2003-08-27 07:18 pm (UTC)The story: gorgeously woven. I love the mood, the picture, the feeling you create. I love Fraser's thoughts, so keenly off-set by Ray's words, Ray's gentle worries.
So many wonderful lines, but this one stuck with me:
All his dreams are cloaked in white, soft blue shadows.
Beautiful.