ext_12440 ([identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-08-27 07:16 pm (UTC)

This is... You are... Damn you people, for stunning me into incoherency. This is lovely. I wish I could write like this! The implications inherent in every segment...gorgeous. Nicely, nicely done. I love the build-up and I particularly like the last lie.

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