ext_12440 ([identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-08-27 06:52 pm (UTC)

This is really nicely done. I love looking at the characters through her eyes. Pefect vignettes about Francesca, Maria, and Ray. Love the set-up, the mom-isms. How she can read right thru Ray, no matter what. And I love that she knows how good Benny is for him.

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