ext_6791 (
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2003-08-28 02:52 pm (UTC)
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I really like this, and event though you didn't make the 100 word limit you were trying for, there wasn't a word wasted.
I especially liked the image of red paint bleeding, right after the line about men being shot in their own home.
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I especially liked the image of red paint bleeding, right after the line about men being shot in their own home.