ext_16416 ([identity profile] kist.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-04-18 07:02 am (UTC)

I loved Ray's unique observations, being confused yet intrigued by Fraser's makeup application ritual. The process as you described was rhythmic and somewhat hypnotic. I enjoyed the subtle hint of something more just lurking on the edge.

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