jaymalea (
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2003-09-20 05:06 am (UTC)
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Lovely. I especially liked this sentence. The cadence was just spectacular.
"He pulled Fraser hard against him, and their cocks kissed, a sticky-slick skid of skin against skin."
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"He pulled Fraser hard against him, and their cocks kissed, a sticky-slick skid of skin against skin."