ext_2734 ([identity profile] kassrachel.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-09-26 08:41 pm (UTC)

That was absolutely wonderful!! Lizzy felt real to me, just the right blend of sweetness and cranky teenage entitlement; the cheese popcorn was a lovely touch; the gentle snarking at the end was funny and sweet. Nice work!

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