ext_28386 ([identity profile] mizface.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2008-08-20 03:18 am (UTC)

So I really really love this, which is no surprise since I love all your stuff. But here's my favorite bit:

*Bob sighed. "Mother, for the last time, Caroline wasn't talking about you and Dad. Didn't she invite you to live . . .well, to come stay with us?"

"You don't have to convince me of anything, Son. I'm just an old woman. It's not important what I think."

"Oh, for the love of . . . . We'll talk later, Mother." Bob turned to his son. "Anyway, there was more room over here, and your mother thought a change of scene might be nice, so . . . "*

Ha! Glad to see Bob getting a taste of his own medicine!

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