ext_3526 ([identity profile] sihayab.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction2003-10-17 02:34 pm

Yet another one

Because I need to think of something other than hospitals and brain tumors...




“Mmmmm, that’s good, Frase. Try a little hip action... That’s right.”

“Ah. Thank you, Ray. I believe it’s more a matter of establishing the proper rhythm, however, than the actual movement itself.”

“Rhythm’s good, rhythm’s great, but if you don’t put your back into it, why bother in the first place? Lemme show you...”

“That’s... astonishing, Ray.”

“It’s not that hard. If you’d just loosen up your... See? You’re getting the idea.”

“But surely, if I wrapped my...”

“Jesus, Fraser! Where did you learn that? Oh. Oh, man, that’s incredible.”

“Are you sure, Ray? It seems—”

“If you take your hand... Yeah, that’s it.”

“I must admit, that is better.”

“See? And you thought I didn’t know what I was doing.”

“I never doubted your competence, Ray. However, you did admit that you’d never done this with a man—”

“Have you?”

“Is this more comfortable?”

“You didn’t answer my question, Fraser.”

“I, uh... Oh, I apologize, Ray. I didn’t mean to—”

“I’m fine. Just a bruise, nothing broken. I think.”

“It was completely unintentional, I assure you. I couldn’t see in the dark. Why don’t we put on the light?”

“I told you when we started. It’s better in the dark, because we can focus on touch. And you still haven’t answered my question.”

“Wouldn’t you prefer—”

Fraser. Have you or have you not done this with a man?”

“Yes, Ray.”

“Thought so.”

“That doesn’t lessen the significance of our efforts.”

“I know that.”

“It only happened once, many years ago, when we were living in Inuvik.”

“A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...”

“Actually, Ray, Inuvik may be remote, but it in no way resembles a galaxy.”

“Just forget it. It doesn’t matter.”

“I can’t forget it, and it does matter. Just because you’re not the first—”

“I told you. It makes no difference to me. I just...”

“You just what?”

“I dunno. I just wanted to be the first guy you danced with.”

“You may not be the first, Ray, but you’re the best.”

“Damn right, Frase. Now shut up and dip me, you freak.”

[identity profile] kassrachel.livejournal.com 2003-10-17 06:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I love it I love it I love it!

:-)

[identity profile] uselessplayback.livejournal.com 2003-10-17 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
“A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...”

“Actually, Ray, Inuvik may be remote, but it in no way resembles a galaxy.”


Ah! My day brightens already! Dancing in the dark with Fraser and Ray. ^_^
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[identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com 2003-10-17 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Fnich.

Flurble.

Snetch.

and
GUFFAW

[identity profile] tobyfan.livejournal.com 2003-10-17 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww. Sweet and yummy and heartfelt. I enjoyed this muchly.

And good for you for getting your mind off your troubles, even if for a little while. *g*

[identity profile] jenboo.livejournal.com 2003-10-17 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
*sigh* guys dancing. with each other. I love it. 'Shut up and dip me, you freak.' *sigh*
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[identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com 2003-10-17 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah. What she said.

:D
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[identity profile] akite.livejournal.com 2003-10-17 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I've got the giggles now. That was great. Makes me think of The Boss' Dancing in the Dark.