ext_19264 ([identity profile] faemovana.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-10-22 03:29 am (UTC)

very nice!

Her Ray took her hand and smiled at her new wedding band, and walked her to the buffet table, leaving her old Ray behind with his true marriage.

I think this was the best part..though I don't know why..just, it really, really worked for me. *G*

thanks for sharing!

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