lamardeuse (
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2003-10-22 08:55 pm (UTC)
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Wow. So many great moments in this, but this one got me for some reason:
...they ate as usual, heads down, mouths full, silent and efficient...
You've captured them perfectly.
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...they ate as usual, heads down, mouths full, silent and efficient...
You've captured them perfectly.