ext_12385 ([identity profile] tobyfan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-11-06 05:41 pm (UTC)

Very cute and clever.

At first, when I got to this part --

"I admit Ray; I was trying to send a subtle message with my choice of gift." I roll that around in the old noggin for a minute. Yeah, I think he's saying what I think he's saying. At least I think so.

-- I thought, hmm, something's not right here. Would he just admit it so freely. And then you suprised me with the misunderstanding on Ray's part.

I love when fic surprises me.


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