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2003-04-24 05:42 pm (UTC)
Addicted to Eyeliner
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<As we worked together, weeks and then months, my heart began making treacherous noises, the gunshot sounds of rotten ice breaking up in spring.>
Ooh. Nice image.
<An image of Ray dancing in tight jeans and black t-shirt, eyes glittering and head tossed back, floats across my mind's eye.>
What are you people doing to me? Guys with eyeliner were never my thing *before*! <g>
I loved the play on words in the title and at the end. Very well done.
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Addicted to Eyeliner
<As we worked together, weeks and then months, my heart began making treacherous noises, the gunshot sounds of rotten ice breaking up in spring.>
Ooh. Nice image.
<An image of Ray dancing in tight jeans and black t-shirt, eyes glittering and head tossed back, floats across my mind's eye.>
What are you people doing to me? Guys with eyeliner were never my thing *before*! <g>
I loved the play on words in the title and at the end. Very well done.