ext_1028 ([identity profile] dracostella.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-12-12 08:18 am (UTC)

Wow, this is an awesome story! Very unexpected and refreshing and all around great!

Fraser looked around him at the giant pile of luggage, backpacks, and trunks. "I didn’t know that I hadn’t..." He looked up and saw the multitude of Rays shaking their heads, some laughing, and a few of them crying.


This is a wonderful scene!

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