ext_2734 ([identity profile] kassrachel.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-04-23 05:33 am (UTC)

This is marvelous!! The dialogue is spot-on, the story's funny, and I love how you give us clues to where they are now and what their lives are like (the reference to the variable Arctic daylight at the beginning, and then that fantastic final line) rather than telling us outright. Brava!

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