ext_12399 ([identity profile] ardent-muses.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-12-30 05:06 am (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful. So many great passages, including the one already mentioned, but also the piece starting at "thinking of Ray's rough voice ..." That just hooked me right in. Lovely.

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