ext_12440 ([identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-12-31 04:44 am (UTC)

This is *lovely* and *hot* and an extremely nice bedtime story for me. It reads very much Fraser and Ray (I could "hear" Ray's inner monologue), and I just love cliche fic, because there's a *reason* these contrived situations are written about - it's *fun stuff*.

And while the rest of it was sweet and hot and funny, your final lines:
We'll see," is all he says. It sounds like a promise anyway.

...just slayed me, because they are so laden with true love. I adore it.



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