This is utterly charming. I can go for cliche setups if this is what happens!

Love the Ray voice, and Ben is way sexy when seen through Ray's eyes. The setting seemed very real and I like the grounding details you used, like the stinky sleeping bag, Ray's ratty gray boxers, the sexual details, and the awkwardness of maneuvering in such a small space.

I'd join the Church of Ben if I could roll around with him too. ;)