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Shade ([identity profile] daughtershade.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-01-05 01:47 pm (UTC)

Lovely Theo. I like this sort of internal story. It gives you a feel for a character that no amount of running, jumping, and shooting ever will.

I especially liked this bit...

(Another irony? Mr. It Only Takes An Extra Second normally carries a handcuff key on his uniform… but this trip he wasn't wearing it. So even the Great Preparo was unprepared, which means I don't have to beat myself up too bad for not being up to snuff.)

Because I've always wondered why Fraser just didn't whip out a key what with being perfect and all. :D


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