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lamardeuse ([identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-01-20 01:54 pm (UTC)

For the first few lines I was sure this was Ray, and then I had the unpleasant shock of realizing I was in Victoria's head. You very accurately portray it as a cold, calculating place--the way she scopes out the passengers is chilling. Great stuff.

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