ext_9042 ([identity profile] estrella30.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-01-24 01:05 am (UTC)

Mmmm, an episode-related flashfic that I recognize! Yay :)

Lol, yes, I'm trying to go in orderr and it's a little slow going so I'm still all the way back here in the beginning of Season2. Glad you recognized it!

I especially loved Benny's incomprehension and Ray's irritation. You catch the tone of their dialogue perfectly.

Thanks so much! It was my first DS fic so I'm glad I got them right (though I did have a lot of help) so thank you!

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