lynnmonster ([identity profile] lynnmonster.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-01-26 10:12 pm (UTC)

Oh, wonderful!

Great dialogue! I also particularly loved Ray vanishing behind the counter, with the thudding and all, and Fraser's "Years, Ray?" Years?.

Thanks for the laugh and the warm, glowy feeling!

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