ext_12440 ([identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-03-03 06:30 am (UTC)

*big kisses because I adore you*

Wow. This was - yeah. This is one of those *moment* pieces. You know? I had chills at the end - because, yeah, for Fraser and for Ray, sitting there, heads leaned back, both of them aware of the moment, of how lucky they are to have each other, and you wrote it perfectly, ended it perfectly, because any further would have been too much. This was sheer loveliness.

And Princess Bride references will get you everywhere.

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