ext_2734 (
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2003-04-24 06:00 am (UTC)
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I like the way you show us what they've fought about without pausing to give us the backstory.
And Ray's almost-inaudible line about Stella -- ouch. But it felt very real.
The very last line is lovely, too. :-)
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And Ray's almost-inaudible line about Stella -- ouch. But it felt very real.
The very last line is lovely, too. :-)