ext_12414 ([identity profile] ajinamoto.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2003-04-24 08:16 am (UTC)

Love this. You feel sorry for both of them, but happy that they can get past this. It's so easy to say something in the heat of the moment that can cut to the core. I liked Fraser's feeling so bad about it, but being Fraser (and the product of Fraser Sr. and his grandparents) not knowing what to do about it. I like to think, though, that Ray has helped him get to that spot where he's finally able to apologize.

Glad to see something new by you Bast!

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