ext_21700 ([identity profile] neci-ouida.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-03-14 10:15 am (UTC)

freakn' HOT CANOLLI !

Your use of imagery to take me there is just so cool...yeah I know that is so 80's, but I can't help it...Your work has made me non-lingual. I LOVED the description of Ray's eating of the canolli the best...but the alley scene was even better. I can't stop babbling...I am stopping now...no, wait...I loved this hot fic, you are totally rockin in the fic department, write more...okay now I stop.

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