ext_12440 ([identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-05-19 09:37 am (UTC)

*whimpers helplessly*

*fans self and tries to stop flushing in front of my boss*

Dear god, lady. I love this fic with a deep and meaningful passion. This:

Fraser smiled that little, teasing smile that warmed Ray’s belly and made him wonder.

I just, just love. Love that stress on wonder, I just love that sense of potential there.

And here:
Ray knew a kiss when he got one, underwater and half-drowned or not.

*nodsnods* Word.

Better. So much better than a panicky underwater press of cold, slick lips.sex. I could quote the whole damn thing. Loved this particularly:

Fraser felt good: smooth and soft-over-hard. Fraser tasted good: sweet, with just a hint of spice. Fraser even sounded good: kind of desperate, but really enjoying himself, too.

Guh. Yeah. Wow. Loved this.



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