ext_12440 ([identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-05-29 04:54 pm (UTC)

Dear. God. *fans self and tries to catch my breath* Um. WOw. Yeah. Okay. THis was fucking *wonderful*. Dear god. I, uh. Hot and sweet and unbelievably wonderful car sex!

You had me *cracking up* at this:

"He was very distraught, Ray, and I speak Mandarin.”

Great mix of humor and sex and desperation and - yum.

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