His hair had never looked so - so extravagantly undomesticated.
What a fantastic image ....
A thesaurus is a wonderful thing. 'Wild' just wasn't cutting it, and the words together just sounded so Fraser-like.
This story is mostly the result of our discussion on language and Fraser. Everything I edited out of the first story ended up in the second. I simply couldn't make up my mind on POV for the first one and realized I could do both.
I've managed to whittle down the priorities - Saturday will take care of all the out of the house stuff and Sunday and Monday are TV time. Can't write during thunderstorms and that's the forecast. I'm going to flip a coin, maybe draw a DVD out of a hat and indulge myself thoroughly!
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What a fantastic image ....
A thesaurus is a wonderful thing. 'Wild' just wasn't cutting it, and the words together just sounded so Fraser-like.
This story is mostly the result of our discussion on language and Fraser. Everything I edited out of the first story ended up in the second. I simply couldn't make up my mind on POV for the first one and realized I could do both.
I've managed to whittle down the priorities - Saturday will take care of all the out of the house stuff and Sunday and Monday are TV time. Can't write during thunderstorms and that's the forecast. I'm going to flip a coin, maybe draw a DVD out of a hat and indulge myself thoroughly!
Thanks again - you've been wonderful!