ext_2884 ([identity profile] imkalena.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-06-09 08:39 am (UTC)

GAWD.

I haven't read a lot of DS lately, but this (and its prequel) . . . wow! Talk about HOT, I knew Ray could do more with that mouth than just suck cock! I adore your Ray with his hot smutty mouth, and your staid Fraser who finally cracks and fucks Ray in the parking ramp.

It's hot and snarky and funny but it has a kind of poignancy, too, the way you laid those characters bare getting them laid. *happysigh*

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