ext_12426 ([identity profile] jenboo.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-06-15 01:11 pm (UTC)

wow...this is a fascinating study of Victoria. The second person narrative gives her an eerily detached quality that I think is so appropriate for her.
excellent work!

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