ext_6735 ([identity profile] pearl-o.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-06-27 07:46 pm (UTC)

Mmmm, I'm so glad you got this done. It's yummy.

I especially like this part:

Ray froze, seemingly immobilized by Fraser's loose grip.

Fraser didn't know why such a light touch would have such a profound effect; Ray appeared to be fascinated by Fraser's fingers on his wrist.


and:

When he reopened his eyes, he realized the world was an entirely different place than he'd thought it was; apparently there was room for his own joy, embodied by an almost-naked Ray Kowalski rubbing up against him and stroking him off.

Mmmmmm.

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