ext_8598 ([identity profile] ekaterinn.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-07-18 09:29 pm (UTC)

I'd tried commenting before but LJ ate my words. *makes face* *tries again*

I liked this very much. It's very understated as Vecchio slowly supresses himself to become quite literally someone else, scars and all. And it got very shivery at the end, which I always enjoy.

(The understatement of this fic reminds me of your "Roots Rain", which I never sent feedback for, but which I read several times to catch all the lovely nuances.)

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