ext_885 ([identity profile] engenda.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-09-07 04:33 pm (UTC)

How do I love thee? Let me count the ways.

I love that you make me cry. I love that you can write Cadet!Fraser so well that I'm blushing for him. I love how you capture the loneliness that is such a part of him. I love how you know, he knows he's lonely but can't do anything about that. I love the ache he has for friends. I love how you wrote his anticipation and then disappointment. I love how you drew the loneliness that we all have at one point or another in our lives, so clearly with so few words.

I love how you hurt my heart.

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