lynnmonster ([identity profile] lynnmonster.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-09-12 05:20 pm (UTC)

Oooh, very nice!

It's good to see Vecchio letting go of the last trappings of Armando, and it's good, I think, that it takes him so long to do it.

For some reason, I especially liked this part:

The Ray got me. Kowalski and I, even with everything we are to each other, hardly ever call each other Ray.

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