ext_885 ([identity profile] engenda.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-09-27 05:09 pm (UTC)

This had me shivering in a creepy, big brother type of way. It stands to reason that Ray would keep an eye on his family while he's away and in his position, he would be able to do so.

What I really loved was Ray's isolation, it was almost tangible.

You're so good.

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