ext_12426 ([identity profile] jenboo.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-09-28 12:53 pm (UTC)

Good lord, I can't believe I haven't commented on this yet.

I loved the darkness in this, the dark power that Vecchio wields over Nero, over the people who answer to him. There's something very menacing about him even though you've never really had him commit any violence in this piece.

The women with the long, dark hair is an interesting touch. It's kind of ambiguous. Is it a female Fraser, or is it Victoria he's fucking? Gave me the chills, sister, let me tell you!!

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