ext_1202 ([identity profile] raveninthewind.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-09-30 02:46 pm (UTC)

I really enjoyed this--the pain, and then the desire got too strong for Ray to deny. And Fraser--he's not very visible, but his effect on Ray is apparent in every line.

(And I laughed at the "canoodle". *g*)

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