sprat ([identity profile] sprat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2004-11-25 01:50 pm (UTC)

Mmmmmn...yum. You do some excellent Ray/Ray, [livejournal.com profile] estrella30. I actually started reading this yesterday, and was right about here:

Kowalski is hunched over, still drying that stupid dyed blond mop of his, and Ray closes his eyes and can see the smooth bend of Kowalski's spine - the faint lines of his ribs and the muscles in his back. Kowalski's jeans are open - just the top button popped - but that's enough that Ray can see the grey elastic of Kowalski's briefs, and he wonders if Kowalski's skin would be cold if he touched it.

when my computer up and died. So not a good place to stop. I nearly cried. But oh, man, was it worth the wait.;)

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