ext_1294 ([identity profile] merelyn.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2005-01-12 08:04 am (UTC)

Oh. Ouch.

I love how you've managed to convey so much of what happened to them in so few words. I definitely had to re-read it in order to pick up on everything. Of course, it is 3 am.

Anyway, nicely done!

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