ext_863 ([identity profile] abelladonna.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2005-01-12 01:21 pm (UTC)

::is stunned::

::rereads::

Oh god that hurt.

::rereads again::

That hurt so freakin' bad.

But, damn. So much conveyed with so few rods! The tragedy of the situation, Fraser's desperation, Ray's desire to stay with him...

My fav part was this though, How beautiful, his home. How terrible. It's the first hint that you get that this is not just FraserAngst. No, it's tragedy and fear and loss.

::rereads again::

God, it hurts so very very good!

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