ext_14299 ([identity profile] serialkarma.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2005-01-13 08:26 pm (UTC)

Oh, sweetie, this is so good!

"Don't you?" he asked. She felt his fingers brush against the tiny diamond of her engagement ring before curling around her hand. "It's me - it's my life lately. I got into the academy," he said, tugging her away from the wall and up against his chest. "I'm gonna marry you. See? Champion," he said, lowering his head to kiss her softly.

This is so perfect! I can so see this happening!

And the one with Victoria broke my heart for poor Fraser.

You have such lovely, interesting characterizations of people here, particularly the women. Lovely!

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