sprat ([identity profile] sprat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2005-01-20 05:40 pm (UTC)

Oh, this is great! Not clueless Fraser is always cool to see, and you've managed it while keeping him very much in character. Plus the little details I always love in your stories, like this one:

(Fraser steadied them before they toppled, thank god, because otherwise it would’ve been an entire afternoon of “Does this forensics report belong to the Borgia murder or the Caravaggio heist?” “I think you’ll find that’s the takeout menu for Luigi’s, Ray,” blah blah)

Hee! Perfect. :)

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