Okay, that? *points at story* Is brilliance. Also better than coffee: each one of Ray's heartstopping chaotic emotional U-turns hit me right in the adrenaline; I'm still jazzed. That's quite a feat. The whole talking stick thing rocked -- so totally a Ray-move. And that last bit with the epaulettes? Whoo.
so, so late to the party
Date: 2005-02-07 07:12 am (UTC)