You get the ooh-hot icon for steamy good quality. I liked the way you treated Bob in this story--often we see him as being a distant, figurehead father to wee!Ben from the beginning, from the moment his wife was killed. You've given him a chance to grieve and have a go at being a Dad, a place to start before he begins to withdraw from Benton.

Very well done and a terrific take on the challenge. TYK!