ext_993 ([identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2005-02-26 08:58 pm (UTC)

Such an angry young man. Mute from the sheer volume of anger about his life.

Offhand, this is my favorite description of the story--YES, YES, exactly!! You've really nailed it!

On some level his grandfather understands and he gives Ben an opportunity to get some of that anger out in a relatively safe place.

Exactly right--I'm so glad that it comes across. I didn't want people thinking it was just "abuse"--well, yes, at first I want you thinking that, but honestly, I mean this as an act of love on George's part. He's letting himself be a target, giving the boy a mode of expression, but also taking his feelings seriously, if that makes sense.

This comment makes me happy, happy! Yay!

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