ext_28360 ([identity profile] bohemian--storm.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction 2005-03-02 02:44 am (UTC)

That was absolutely amazing. I loved this.

He not losing breath, they’re sharing it ... That was easily my favourite line. Such a beautiful moment you've captured here.

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