ext_12399 (
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2005-03-02 05:59 am (UTC)
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Oh, so sweet, sweet, sweet!
Love the internal monologue. Or dialogue. Or whatever that is. *G* Nice use of parentheses to convey that.
I like the way you set it up with the Stella memories. And then the suspense! And finally, the climactic scene on the sofa -- whee! Delicious!
So talented, you are.
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Love the internal monologue. Or dialogue. Or whatever that is. *G* Nice use of parentheses to convey that.
I like the way you set it up with the Stella memories. And then the suspense! And finally, the climactic scene on the sofa -- whee! Delicious!
So talented, you are.